Here mine is.
Wednesday, 24 June 2015
In troys science we have be learning about food webs and we hades to make a poster about it I chose Amazon rainforest. The main source of engery is the sun and the main consumer is the puma. The puma eats the elk,bdeer and the moose. The moose eats the grass and twigs. The deer eats the plant and the leafs. The elk eats the grass, bark and leafs. The omiuvore
Thursday, 18 June 2015
Description: In poutama every Monday some people go off to kapahaka and some people stay to do et reo with Elly and troy I stay and do et reo and this time we had to make a puppet pals of what the maroi fruits with a buddy and I went with gaby. Here is my video
I think that you did a good job at saying the words
Evaluation : I think I did well on my pronunceation but I need to work on moving them when they are talking.
Monday, 15 June 2015
WALT: to add impact
S.C. : to write a story about what it's like to be a hockey ball
Big idea: the goalies eyes shimmer like the moon at night as I get closer on the long artificial bright green grass , the crowd goes wild with amazement as the team yells as loud as they could "goal". The crowd chants one more time as I roll on the grass to the other Side of the field. The goalie try's to stop me but I just keep on going. As soon as I hit the the backboard, the whistle blows. The game stops, "yay" it's finally over. I guess it's not so bad being a hockey who am I kidding it horribale.
Feedback: I love how you have given me a clear pitcher of what is is about.
Feedfoward:maby you could say what it looks the ball looks like by Ashlee.
Evaluation: I think I did really well on describing on what it's like being a hockey ball but I think I need to work on describing what the hockey ball looks like
Wednesday, 3 June 2015
Description: in Troys science group we were doing art about food chains and food webs, and we had to draw a food chain on the piece of paper with everything conecting of the sun. Here it is!
Big idea: We found out that not all of our food is from the supermarket pretty much all of our food is made by the sun, for example letece is from a plant which needs the sun to grow.
Feedback: it think that you drew it really clearly and people can see what comes from what.
Feedfoward: I think you could ad a bit more detail.
Evaluation: I think I did good doing the poster so that you can see what comes from what.