Wednesday, 24 June 2015

Around the world food webs

In troys science we have be learning about food webs and we hades to make a poster about it I chose Amazon rainforest. The main source of engery is the sun and the main consumer is the puma. The puma eats the elk,bdeer and the moose. The moose eats the grass and twigs. The deer eats the plant and the leafs. The elk eats the grass, bark and leafs. The omiuvore
Here mine is.

Thursday, 18 June 2015

Et reo

Description: In poutama every Monday some people go off to kapahaka and some people stay to do et reo with Elly and troy I stay and do et reo and this time we had to make a puppet pals of what the maroi fruits with a buddy and I went with gaby. Here is my video

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I think that you did a good job at saying the words
From aalaa

Evaluation : I think I did well on my pronunceation but I need to work on moving them when they are talking.

Two stars and a wish

In poutama we made a two stars and a wish to show what we did well and what we need to work on here is my poster

Evaluation I think I did well on my poster I think it showed what I need to work on really clearly.

Monday, 15 June 2015

What it's like to be a hockey ball

WALT: to add impact
S.C. : to write a story about what it's like to be a hockey ball

Big idea: the goalies eyes shimmer like the moon at night as I get closer on the long artificial bright green grass , the crowd goes wild with amazement as the team yells as loud as they could "goal". The crowd chants one more time as I roll on the grass to the other Side of the field. The goalie try's to stop me but I just keep on going. As soon as I hit the the backboard, the whistle blows. The game stops, "yay" it's finally over. I guess it's not so bad being a hockey who am I kidding it horribale.

                                                             The end
Feedback: I love how you have given me a clear pitcher of what is is about.
Feedfoward:maby you could say what it looks the ball looks like by Ashlee.

Evaluation: I think I did really well on describing on what it's like being a hockey ball but I think I need to work on describing what the hockey ball looks like

Wednesday, 3 June 2015

Science portfolio sample

Description: in Troys science group we were doing art about food chains and food webs, and we had to draw a food chain on the piece of paper with everything conecting of the sun. Here it is!

Big idea: We found out that not all of our food is from the supermarket pretty much all of our food is made by the sun, for example letece is from a plant which needs the sun to grow.

Feedback: it think that you drew it really clearly and people can see what comes from what.
 Feedfoward: I think you could ad a bit more detail.
From serena

Evaluation: I think I did good doing the poster so that you can see what comes from what.